As far as experimentation goes this was pretty spot on. Well done, I don't know why it has less than three stars. The backgrounds look great, my only major complaint is maybe line weight but that could be a stylistic thing.
As far as experimentation goes this was pretty spot on. Well done, I don't know why it has less than three stars. The backgrounds look great, my only major complaint is maybe line weight but that could be a stylistic thing.
Yes the lines could be thinner for a more pleasing view i will keep that in mind.
Thank you for viewing!
I liked the voice work. It's pretty great. If I had a suggestion to make, maybe do a bit more shading with the backgrounds to better convey depth and the like. This will elevate the overall quality of the visuals, and make the animation pop more.
Thanks, but that's obviously just the style for this video. Try to have a variety of styles for each video.
It looked really nice and you could tell the idea came from the heart. I like the simpsonwave you used, it gives this the right feel and atmosphere. I look forward to seeing more of what you can do.
Thanks. Actually I was inspired by this track.
Sadly it was quite slow and not a lot happened. I think you should find a voice actor or two to keep the pace along. Remember also that multiple things can and should be animated at the same time to give it the punch it needs to resonate with people. Keep working though.
Thanks a lot for your input!! I have absolutely no voice actors because as far as I can tell, no one can resemble a depressed old man. But thanks a lot!
hahaha that was funny, well done! I like the animation's fluidity.
Hey! Thanks for the compliments!
Colorful, beautiful, and evocative. Well made in every sense. Thanks for making this treat.
thank you!
I liked that it was original. Good job Tyler, I'm going to check out your other stuff now.
Oh thanks! My other stuff isn't that good but I hope you enjoy it!
You're getting better Chris. Keep at it, I'd like to see more in color soon!
Thanks. You will :)
That's pretty good actually. You have a good punchline and everything and it was to the point. Thanks for not wasting my time with it being too drawn out, as you see too often on here with things. I'm not sure how this is less than a 3 because you've done better than a lot of stuff out in the past few days.
Thanks for your positive feedback, man ! I actually would like to make animations with a little more details while keeping the same kind of humour/atmosphere. And for the ratings, I just guess that some people on Newgrounds have, say, too high standards, but I get it, my animation style isn't "perfect" yet, and I began to make cartoons only last year, but I'm sure I'll eventually get better !
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